The Monosyllable

is a big word, and so is
trepidation. Too big for me.
I know hallucination, even discombobulation,
but they’re long, unwieldy.
I’d prefer a single syllable,
the one which goes between
selfish I’s and demeaning You’s,
crafting a phrase entirely unselfish,
entirely exalting.
But I worry that one syllable’s too short —
too short! —
too short that it’s become
cliché.
04:09 AM
December 20, 2005
















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aahh..another wonder from corsarius himself..:)
happy holidays! :D
By yayam on 12.20.05 6:41 pm
that, coming from corsarius himself?
*whispers to self* the corsarius, formerly known as the-one-who-wields-the-huge-guns?
:P
(and by huge guns i mean big, intimidating, discombobulating words.)
…
“selfish I’s and demeaning You’s”
perfect for my season of hate.
(no, not christmas.)
By ia on 12.20.05 7:02 pm
to yayam: thanks. have a joyful xmas season, too!
to ia: why? what is the crime that i’ve committed? ;)
“perfect for my season of hate.” the monosyllable takes care of the problem.
By Corsarius on 12.20.05 7:41 pm
hark! someone’s in “love”.
By Abaniko on 12.21.05 4:17 pm
buti na maging cliche kaysa yung sa version ng salbakuta…
“stupid!”
By drakulita on 12.21.05 5:30 pm
to abaniko: aba, how did you know? obviously obvious hehe.
to drakulita: hehehe. hey, galing ng last post ah! ;)
By Corsarius on 12.21.05 7:28 pm
Better unique than being cliche, diba? :D Kudos! :D
Happy Holidays!
By vaNINski on 12.21.05 7:58 pm
how happy the holidays is for you. happy, happy, happy! ^_^
By sunset_eyes on 12.23.05 11:54 am
to vaninski: you’re right about that. thanks. merry xmas!
to sunset_eyes: hm, not entirely happy, hehe..how about you? i hope u enjoy the noche buena!
By Corsarius on 12.23.05 3:01 pm
happy hols corsarius! and if abaniko is right, our corsarius is latest victim of lurve ;))
By -Poison- on 12.23.05 3:52 pm
lol. i agree with drakulita’s comments.
merry christmas!
By cosmochiq0011 on 12.24.05 12:54 pm
to poison: haha! been its victim for years now. happy holidays, man!
to cosmochiq0011: merry christmas, ygraine!
By Corsarius on 12.24.05 4:40 pm
A very merry christmas to you Corsarius and all your readers!
I hope you had a nice holiday!
Cheers
Viruswitch
By viruswitch on 12.25.05 11:43 pm
hope u had a merry christmas too, viruswitch!
By Corsarius on 12.29.05 6:55 pm
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