Slip of the Pen

The Monosyllable

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Phantasmagoria
is a big word, and so is
trepidation. Too big for me.
I know hallucination, even discombobulation,
but they’re long, unwieldy.
I’d prefer a single syllable,
the one which goes between
selfish I’s and demeaning You’s,
crafting a phrase entirely unselfish,
entirely exalting.

But I worry that one syllable’s too short —
too short! —
too short that it’s become
cliché.


04:09 AM
December 20, 2005

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aahh..another wonder from corsarius himself..:)

happy holidays! :D

that, coming from corsarius himself?

*whispers to self* the corsarius, formerly known as the-one-who-wields-the-huge-guns?

:P

(and by huge guns i mean big, intimidating, discombobulating words.)

“selfish I’s and demeaning You’s”

perfect for my season of hate.
(no, not christmas.)

to yayam: thanks. have a joyful xmas season, too!

to ia: why? what is the crime that i’ve committed? ;)

“perfect for my season of hate.” the monosyllable takes care of the problem.

hark! someone’s in “love”.

buti na maging cliche kaysa yung sa version ng salbakuta…

“stupid!”

to abaniko: aba, how did you know? obviously obvious hehe.

to drakulita: hehehe. hey, galing ng last post ah! ;)

Better unique than being cliche, diba? :D Kudos! :D

Happy Holidays!

how happy the holidays is for you. happy, happy, happy! ^_^

to vaninski: you’re right about that. thanks. merry xmas!

to sunset_eyes: hm, not entirely happy, hehe..how about you? i hope u enjoy the noche buena!

happy hols corsarius! and if abaniko is right, our corsarius is latest victim of lurve ;))

lol. i agree with drakulita’s comments.

merry christmas!

to poison: haha! been its victim for years now. happy holidays, man!

to cosmochiq0011: merry christmas, ygraine!

A very merry christmas to you Corsarius and all your readers!

I hope you had a nice holiday!

Cheers

Viruswitch

hope u had a merry christmas too, viruswitch!

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