Comments on: Deviations

By: tina

tina — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 10:47:07 +0000

“He closed the door. He sneered at the thought that she had actually cursed herself.”

maybe i’m just slow, but this one made me smile when i realized the joke ^^

that last one is…a bit strange? it seems like a stretch, but it’s a funny play on head banging :)

maybe it’s stranger that a repairman would call someone else’s computer “baby” :D

By: PC Technician From Hell » Crimson Crux

PC Technician From Hell » Crimson Crux — Sat, 13 Jan 2007 19:09:24 +0000

[...] Have you experienced being “helped out” by this kind of PC technician? (Look for the second short short story, “PC Overhaul“.) The one who has the penchant of equating the presence of Linux with a dysfunctional system? [...]

By: Deviations II: Touch the Sky » Slip of the Pen

Deviations II: Touch the Sky » Slip of the Pen — Tue, 02 Jan 2007 18:38:34 +0000

[...] [Remember the first Deviations? Again, not for kids. This piece is best read with Kanye West’s Touch the Sky playing in the background.] Touch the Sky [...]

By: Corsarius

Corsarius — Sun, 13 Nov 2005 14:03:00 +0000

to kai: Hehe. Glad that you liked it. ;)

By: kai

kai — Wed, 09 Nov 2005 10:23:00 +0000

Ang ganda nun Sacred vestments. Nakakatawa lang na playboy pa talaga yun thong. :p

Medyo late ko na na-gets yun headbanger.

By: Corsarius

Corsarius — Wed, 09 Nov 2005 09:11:00 +0000

to hera: that’s…just the tip of the iceberg. i think i can actually put up a separate blog for these devious gems if only I had the time ;) thanks. (and you’re back!)

By: Corsarius

Corsarius — Wed, 09 Nov 2005 09:07:00 +0000

to Senor Enrique: i meant first attempt at fiction which hovers around 100 words (Sacred Vestments, that is) :) i usually write 2-page essays, short stories, and (gasp!) novels.

i’d love to try doing a weekly Deviations, though I can’t promise it. i’m into my last (and thesis) semester and blogging will prove to be a challenge. but it does sound good — good writing exercise, good way to experiment, good medium for creative madness ;)

i’ll certainly try. thank you very very much for the suggestion. and yes, the wicked edgy tone stays! :D

By: hera

hera — Wed, 09 Nov 2005 06:09:00 +0000

the freak was finally unleashed. hehe. or at least the twisted side of the corsarius. and i have to say i love how insanely creative it is.

By: Senor Enrique

Senor Enrique — Tue, 08 Nov 2005 23:37:00 +0000

First attempt at fiction? Whoa! I think you have all the elements there for an interesting (even if only weekly) series of say a few paragraphs per posting. I mean, do a weekly episode on a specified day like Marc Cheyry’s DH every Tuesday night, which I’ve suddenly become a fan of because of his twisted twists; excellent TV writing I think. I’m sure you can do the same here with Beatrice and Damian as your main characters, and then expand from there. Request: keep its wicked edgy tone.